Description of my poems

I have been working on some poetry lately, ("P.M. and your on my brain", is the first posted) Im always revising so any version read has the possibility of being edited by the next read. I have been heavily influenced by beat poets. I kept punctuation to a minimum I want it to feel a bit "stream of consciousness" sort of therapy related. I tried to use line breaks and capitalization in place of the punctuation. I have forced some tenses and meanings of words and ignored some conjugation for a feeling of regression and also to give a feeling of unbalance. It may change a bit later. I will post more of it soon.